Time away can feed your spirit
Time home can rest your soul
Time made sweet, sweethearts cheer it
Little loves make my heart whole
Great big world, let’s explore it
My whole world, three persons full
Six Words, Six Lines
Time away can feed your spirit
Time home can rest your soul
Time made sweet, sweethearts cheer it
Little loves make my heart whole
Great big world, let’s explore it
My whole world, three persons full
Mazerly Musings 
11 responses to “Six Words, Six Lines”
Oh, your attempt is precious and spot on! Beautiful thoughts of time well spent! I love the first three lines starting with the word Time. And that last beauty: “My whole world, three persons full”
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Thank you, Denise!
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There’s a lightness to these lines that also hold their own complexity – they are stories after all. Each 6 word story could stand on its own yet the way you’ve placed them here offers the reader a satisfying canvas to contemplate.
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Thank you so much for this thoughtful comment and feedback!
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Love this! Your last line perfect and thanks for sharing the picture.
I wrote a poem of three word lines today. Once I noticed a couple of lines with three words, it was fun to go with the flow.
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This slice is so simple but wholesome and heartfelt. The picture at the end made my heart sing. I hope you’re soaking up every minute of this break, friend!
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Your last line really touched me and then seeing the photo to match was just perfect. You gave me a new idea to try- turning a 6 word story into a 6 line poem.
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Beautiful slice! ❤
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I love your take using 6 lines of 6 words. The last line sums it up!
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HAPPY SPRING BREAK!!! Suck up every moment of family time, rest time, and sneak in some YOU time =)
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Such a lovely poem expressing your thoughts with that great photo. Especially love the final line!
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